@shashcoffe I like it a lot. Maybe one point for feedback. You could make it more outcome / benefit based and also more specific towards your audience.
GetLanding.io helps marketers build stunning landing pages fast, without the need to hire devs, designers or waste time trying to do it yourself.
Gain: I can develop stunning landing pages fast
Pain: I have to hire devs, developers which are expensive. I can probably do it, but it takes me hours to do.
What do you think?
@shashcoffe@ckpleiser I don't think you can take the word automatic out. Everyone says you can build landing pages fast — no one is saying automatic. Fast will be interpreted relative to a marketer's ability where as automatic is a damn super power.
Which one is more compelling?
"Say goodbye to time-sucking copy & paste, tedious adjustments, and complicated approval processes. Say hello to legally-binding eSignatures & workflows based on flexible, intelligent documents"
"Paperless let’s you create, sign, and manage intelligent documents on one single, easy-to-use & secure platform."
@ckpleiser I like version 2 better, the first one has too many complex words in my opinion by that I mean that it make me have to think a lot more, which is not a bad thing but the second I can "visualize" much faster.
@ckpleiser Version 1 has a lot of adjectives that slows down the flow. Version 2 is more concise but isn't dramatically different than other document programs. Looking at your website the collaboration and workflows really stand out to me.
"Kiss time-sucking copy & paste, adjustments, and fragmented approval processes goodbye. Say hello to intelligent document creation, collaboration, and intuitive approval workflows all in one spot."
I had the same thought as @youreka, I don't really know what an intelligent document is but I looked it up and I think your target market probably does.
@between_team I cannot quite visualise yet what Between.app does. Having had a look at your website, I know do. Kind of. What about:
"Give your remote team a seat at the table with a video calling platform that engages everyone"
@ckpleiser That does sound good!
I suppose to help visualize it a bit better:
If you look at our PH video, you'll notice someone moving from one device to the next in the physical meeting room. (The person from home, which is me!)
With Between, people in the physical meeting room take out their laptops & phones. Remote members can move between these laptops and phones and talk to whoever they want.
It's better than every remote member being on the TV. Instead they can all move to different places in the room. There is a psychological difference, you'll notice your remote colleagues a lot more. But a more obvious difference is that you'll be able to hear your remote colleagues better, AND they'll be able to hear you better.
@mayasinclaire Like it but as a non-retailer I had to look up what share of shelf space means ;) Makes total sense. Could you narrow down small businesses even further to clarify who you can help the most. Seems like a cool product!
great! We are still in pre-launch phase. here's mine, still not sure
Thursday.social is a place where remote teams do weekly socials
Thursday.social is a place for you to hang out with your remote teammates and play games in small break out groups