Dan Schlung

On a scale of zero to Beyonce, rate my landing page

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Hey all. I'm launching soon & put together a pretty basic landing page. I would love constructive criticism on improvements I should make.


Here's what a few friendlies have shared with me so far.

  1. More use of css animations, to make elements pop and feel more interactive

  2. Social proof. (We're prioritizing this & will add soon!)

  3. Less color, more white (this makes me sad, but if its the right thing to do...)

  4. Mixed reactions the use of slideshow, versus breaking this out into something more scrollable.

  5. My wife didn't like that there's a video on the top and told me I'm making a weird face in it anyway. (I mean, my face is just weird by nature, geesh!)

I would love to know if you agree/disagree, and especially what other advice you have for us!


TYSM!

Dan

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