... that are way too tech-heavy or confusing for the average user. Post your current landing page headline below and tell me exactly who your target customer is. I ll reply with 2 or 3 cleaner, high-converting copy alternatives as an English major. Comment from yashika vahi(@yashika_vahi): @anna_jarrett  oh that example does clear things up! another good tagline (although longer one) could be: Crates: Because you shouldn't have to visit five different websites just ... ... same outcome when browsing. You shouldn t have to go to 5 websites, sift through 100s of results to find a shirt you might like. If I ve spent 3 hours reading on the city of Petra