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@new_user__2962022a03acad26fcb4013 "Welcome to the Module's app builder! Let your business speak louder with an app" I would suggest that your lead headline actually address an pain point your ideal customer has. Speaking louder doesn't seem to be a pain point. Maybe something like: "Stand above your competitors" "Speak directly to your customers." Which of them many features you offer are most effective at building the relationship between your app customer and their customer? Is it the chat function? If so maybe go with the problems those features solve.

@new_user__2962022a03acad26fcb4013 Hello Oleksandra, congrats for the new website! Loved your "how does it work" section and product video parts. I have only one comment. Since you have lots of features maybe you can make it visible by a list and when possible users click them they can read seperately. Otherwise, there are lots of slides to read all of them.

@new_user__2962022a03acad26fcb4013 Oh! There is one thing. Maybe you can merge contact us+about us and Help center+FAQ as a dropdown menu to make navbar much more simple :)

@testifi Hi Daniel. Nice landing page. There were a couple of things that stood out to me that are under utilized. You headline seems pretty general. What does a revolution mean nowadays anyway?! I think a headline that would catch my attention is "API testing in a few simple clicks" or "Reduce costs, cycle times, and maintenance by 50%+" (delete "efforts" poor English) These are both things that are eye catching and easy to understand in less than 2 or 3 seconds.

@paul_d_michaels2 Hi Paul, thank you for your comment! I appreciate the feedback and will share that with the team to improve the page accordingly.

@testifi Hello Daniel, thank you so much! Firstly, I loved your hero section which makes me scroll down and steps to use the product. Very clear :) Also, your team section is really good to show you care about teamwork. I have two comments. First, some of your sentences are not legible I don't know maybe because of my browser. I wish I can upload a screenshot here. Second, you can reconsider carousel sliderat the end of the page. Maybe it can be a grid consist of four columns :)

@lukehale Exciting to see your app! I am into breath work, meditation etc... The thing that really stood out to me and made me say "cool" was the fact that your app listened and reacted to my actual breath! I didn't figure this out until near the bottom of your Landing page. May I suggest that you consider reorganizing your above the fold message? Here is what I am suggesting; Your headline: "Responsive to your breath" or "Responsive to your every breath" and have either the image of the breath the woman is exhaling as the main image or just the very short repeating animation of her exhaling and your app responding. What do you think?

@paul_d_michaels2 Thanks, Paul - that's very helpful! I did try and get the breath reactivity concept across with 'Transform Your Breath' (into visuals + audio etc.), but I think it is probably too abstract, especially at first glance. I think re-ordering the content may work too. Thank you for the feedback – let me know if you're interested in trying a beta :)

@lukehale Hey Luke, thank you so much for the feedback! My comments about your site: -I loved your app view in the hero section. -It is good to see product video. -Maybe you can make smaller the placeholder and button. -Your sticky navbar is not visible when you scroll down. Maybe you can add a background color. -Maybe you can add headings in the beginning of the each section -I reccommend to add CTA button maybe in the navbar like "get for free"

@lukehale 👍 Could I ask you to give me your feedback on my landing page? EXERCISE OR EXCUSES How Work-From-Home Professionals Get Fit in 5-minutes It's in my main comment on this page. Thanks!

@paul_d_michaels2 Sure! I'll only comment on the design as other people will be far more qualified to comment on marketing copy etc.: - the key image to me looks very generic, it doesn't reinforce the app's function in any way, perhaps could show the app being used in the intended context - someone exercising at home? - The primary yellow / red colour scheme doesn't quite fit with fitness / wellness to me - The 5 star graphic seems slightly arbitrary - what is the rating from? is it rounded to exactly 5.0? - I would be very cautious about using the Mayo Clinic etc logos - it looks like an endorsement - I think the "start button" could be given more attention, also it is not clear what will happen if clicked on - does it download an app? Also not sure about 'CC' abbreviation for credit card - Would be cool to see more of the UI further down the page - is it a kind of chat bot which sends messages? Not clear exactly what is being signed up for.. Happy to look again if you make any changes :))

@vaalz I took a look and I think it is a bit confusing and disjointed. The design, with the hero image top left, and a lot of empty white space then writing on the right hand side is a bit weird. Also, the copy is a bit confusing. Basically you are offering a fluff free motivational newsletter (assuming I correctly understood what you are offering), but wrote a bunch of fluff to explain what you are offering? I think it is the classical problem of balancing being creative with actually getting your message across in a succinct way. An actionable suggestion would be to focus on getting across what the newsletter is and what benefit I will get from subscribing (what exactly is a motivation email?).

@vaalz Hello Vaalz! happy to hear you like it :) I have some feedback about your landing page: -I recommend to you not using black color as #000000. Try to use dark color a little bit lighter than black instead of pure black. -Your placeholder and button can be smaller and you can consider putting "enter your email" to the corner instead of in the middle and add a small heading for the placeholder. Thus, it can be separate from the button. -you can remove "ok, maybe not". It seems sincere, but I think it is more important not to contradict what you say. Good luck :)

@stephenmallik I checked out iStory and it looks like an awesome product! I have been using https://www.producthunt.com/prod... to help me deal with the overwhelm of marketing. This is what Dan at Makerbox says about the Above the fold (ATF) headline; "Explain the value you provide." Your current ATF headline doesn't really explain the value you provide your customers and how it is unique. One of your testimonials I think nails it "differentiate yourself from others" plus, you made lots of reference to the benefits of using your voice. So putting those together, may I suggest something like this for your ATF headline; "Differentiate Yourself from Your Competition with Something That is Uniquely Yours." Then you can use the great stats and info you have on the page. Thoughts?

@stephenmallik Hey Stephen! Firstly, good luck on the launch! I recommend you to make users name visible in the testimonial section to provide reliablity. Also, pricing card's buttons can be in the same line. I found funnel section a little bit complicated and couldn't understand what you highlight in that section. Apart from these, everything looks good :)

@stephenmallik 👍 Could I ask you to give me your feedback on my landing page? EXERCISE OR EXCUSES How Work-From-Home Professionals Get Fit in 5-minutes It's in my main comment on this page. Thanks!

@paul_d_michaels2 Site looks clean and really well designed. I think the biggest issues I see are based on specificity and believability/credibility. 1) What does it mean to get fit? Be able to run a 5k? Get a 6 pack? Lose 10+kg? 2) Do you have any before and after pics of people who got results? 3) The claim that you can cancel your gym membership needs a lot of proof to back it up. Also, not the end of the world but the guy on the banner holding the phone seems a bit out of place for a fitness app. Overall looks great though!

@adeone Thanks for those observations - I appreciate it. Let me think about what you’ve said, and I might have some clarifying questions or possible solutions for your consideration tomorrow. 👍

@paul_d_michaels2 Hey Paul! I like your idea and overall design of the landing page. I have a few comments: Social proof is great but I think there should be one section for this. Instead of putting too much quotations, you can add some before after photos as @adeone said. Also, I would like to see what kind of messages you send with some images.

@tohxuezun I agree. I am looking into ways to do this so it helps tell the story. I'll update you once I have add them and get your feedback. Thanks! I

@heleana Great webpage and service your offer!! Dan Kulkov Co-founder of MakerBox (on PH) says about the Above the fold (ATF) headline should; "Explain the value you provide." A slight tweak on what you already have I think makes the argument for Videodeck; "Win More Customers With Explainer Videos Done for You" Just a suggestion. Best of luck with your new projects!

@heleana Hey Heleana, Loved your landing page! Congrats on the launch but I couldn't see your product in the list of today's products?

@paul_d_michaels2 Thanks so much for your input! We're still working on perfecting our messaging, so this is super helpful! We actually just launched something new and pretty cool today on PH: producthunt.com/posts/saas-video-script-templates I'd love to get your input there as well. Let me know in the comments what you think!

@pinar_engur Hi Pinar! Thank you so much for your positive feedback! I'm glad you liked it. We actually just launched today: producthunt.com/posts/saas-video-script-templates I'd love it if you could check it and leave me some feedback on what you think! :)

@sydney_mclaughlin Hey Sydney! It looks good :) Maybe you can place heading, explanation and form into a card with background color. Because it is hard to read due to the colorful the image.

@baselog I really loved your landing and idea of the product! Dark and light mode? Great.

@pinar_engur appreciate that a lot! Of course the most important thing to have a dark and light mode ;)

@brennen_barney Hey Brennen! It looks clean :) However, you can reduce the text a little and highlight the important parts.

@sven_radavics Service looks good, I like the concept. A few things that come to mind is: 1) What does the UI look like? 2) Is this for free collaborations only? 3) What happens if a collab goes wrong or people try to scam you etc. 4) If you collaborate, does this take place on your platform, or do you go offline to a different collaborating to do it. 5) Any sort of feedback system to know who has successfully collaborated and what sort of results/ROI they achieved? A lot of potential objections and base information not covered on the landing page.

@adeone Thanks for taking the time Ade. Curious about your question regarding free collaborations only? Is the pricing table not clear? re. Question 3 - do people wonder about that with regards to Tinder, LinkedIn etc. outside of Ts & Cs, is there anything you'd suggest?

@sven_radavics Great questions. >Curious about your question regarding free collaborations only? Is the pricing table not clear? I meant between collaborators. For example, if I am a small company, can I pay to collaborate with a bigger company? Or do we have to both somehow do our research to figure out if a collaboration makes sense? Basically from the standpoint of someone who might be interested in collaborating but has never done it before I am a bit confused as to how exactly it works, what to expect etc. > re. Question 3 - do people wonder about that with regards to Tinder, LinkedIn etc. outside of Ts & Cs, is there anything you'd suggest? I guess question 3 would tie in good with question 5 (I kinda listed stuff I thought of as I went through the page). If there is a reputation/feedback system people can make an informed decision and take it from there!

@sven_radavics Nice concept. Maybe showing the discovery process on your landing page or a screenshot would help users better visualize.

@htwarthur I liked it! Very clean design. But I am not sure the position of CTA button. It looks complicated before you scroll down.

@pinar_engur Thanks for checking us out 🌟 If you found us useful, please share with others. It would mean a lot 🤘

@deleted-4706385 Hey Victor! Your landing page looks really elegant however I have difficulties while reading. maybe you can add transparent background for the text.