Help picking our 1-liner
Daniel Baum
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I'm launching Sleek on PH next week, and trying to pick our 1-liner.
Which is the best?
Votes / recommendations / edits encouraged! Thanks!
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Scott Kosmach@skosmach
Sleek Pay: Shop everywhere with 1-click convenience
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Shop brick-and-mortar with 1-click convenience
Maybe something like "Checkout in 1 click - no matter where you shop."
But I think all of them explain what you're making pretty well. 😄
Love the first one.
Sleek Pay: Making the web your one click shop.
@oscar_wehbe Thanks Oscar! We're not a cart aggregator, so I worry about that being a misconception, but otherwise its a cool twist
I liked the first one.
Been having this struggle recently too, I know what I want to use but struggling with the wording a little
A free social trading app where retail traders collaborate
A free social trading app where retail traders can collaborate
A free social trading app for retail traders to collaborate
A free social trading app for retail trader collaboration
A social trading app where retail traders collaborate (x3)
Launching soon!
I find the first one much more impressive and to-the-point. Moreover, I will be happy to support you on the launch day. Just let me know when you are up to this.
Checkout from any store with 1 click.
Thats that from me !
Buy it with one click.
- makes them click to find out how it works. Wow them with a good write-up.
1 click. Any store. Sleek Pay.
- written like an apple headline (hopefully it sells as well).
Good luck!
Thanks everyone who commented!!! Two winners have emerged, please reply to this comment for which is best:
1. Sleek Pay: Checkout from any store with 1 click
2. Sleek Pay: Amazon-like checkout with cashback, everywhere you shop