FREE: I will roast your landing page

FALAK SHER | phlaunchchecklist.com

1yr ago

55 replies

Landing pages make or break the product. Very low conversion? Makers quit considering there is no product-market fit. The conversion rate can be increased by a few tweaks. And I will share them here: All you have to do is drop a landing page link. I will send a few tips to improve it.

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Khoi Nguyen @khoi_una

Birthday Piano: https://birthday.khoiuna.info/ | Send a song and birthday wish to your loved ones

Upen V @upen946

The conversion rate is decent but let's see https://ZeroToFounder.co

FALAK SHER | phlaunchchecklist.com @falak_sher

@upen946 quick tip: Add crisp chat on your landing page. Buyers have pre-sale questions. Once they get answers, they will definitely purchase it. P.S. I got few sales through this method.

Upen V @upen946

@falak_sher Seriously? I never thought Ebooks would need a chat on landing page. Will see to do this!!

Johan Steneros @jsteneros

We just have a get early access waitlist landing page. But please go for it www.bravemark.co

FALAK SHER | phlaunchchecklist.com @falak_sher

Few tips: - Set sticky header with CTA button - Add auto-focus to email input field for desktop only. On mobile, I don't recommend unless your headline, taglines are small.

Romano Pravdic @romanopravdic

Let the roast begin! https://cashews.finance/

FALAK SHER | phlaunchchecklist.com @falak_sher

@galaxyx7 here are some tips: - make email input field bigger. Atleast equal to the size of CTA. - add auto focus to email input field - instead of showcasing price as yearly $4.66 / month. Say 1 or 2 months free.

Malin Cornelia @malin_cornelia

Oh, go on then https://www.vev.design/

FALAK SHER | phlaunchchecklist.com @falak_sher

@malin_cornelia "Start Building. It's free". This CTA can be improved with elaborate CTA "Get Started. It's free."

Alexandro Martínez @alexandromtzg

https://saasrock.com 😁

FALAK SHER | phlaunchchecklist.com @falak_sher

@alexandromtzg solid product. - Embed Gumroad script so Gumroad product page loads as pop-up - Add live chat for answering pre-sale questions

Ahmed Saleh @ahmedsaleh

Falak is an awesome person to do this. I’d love your feedback on our product https://sabil.io

Brenna Donoghue @brenna_donoghue

morgen.so We launched our homepage yesterday. Any feedback would be amazing!

Ken Savage @kensavage

Thanks Falak. What would you edit to this landing page? https://golaunchclub.com

Naveen S G @naveen_sg

www.leadmonk.io Open for feedback

Ebusian Benjamin @ebusian_benjamin

Check out my landing page https://redink.app/

Reece Atkinson @atkinson

upmeet.me

Isabel Stewart @isabelstewart

Would love feedback on our page: https://guavahealth.com/emergency-card

Here's ours. Thanks for the roast 🔥! https://www.dotenv.org

Scott Kosmach @skosmach

A little scared since we just plopped a bare-bones V1 up a few days ago, but we have thick skin. Thanks in advance. Do your worst 😜 https://www.hint.it

Tetiana Nikolaieva @tetiana_nikolaieva

Yaware TimeTracker (yaware.com) Thanks!

Adrian Cruz @adrian2x

clearmoney.io

Ghost Kitty @ghost-kitty-3262681

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Rich Watson @richw

thetradehub.net thanks

Sven Radavics @sven_radavics

Hi Falak, thanks so much for this! Conversion rate is surprisingly decent considering I know it needs work: https://intribe.co Thanks again!