Roast my Outreach email...
Mehul Fanawala
4 replies
This email is written to offer our RevOps Consultancy Services to B2B SaaS founders.
Subject: {FirstName}, We Fixed It!
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Hi {FirstName},
Nah, not a code, as we're equally clueless about that world. However, we've cracked the code for something just as critical – marketing, sales, and customer service operations.
We've helped over 25 founders and leaders in 7 countries who were once in the same boat, clueless about these essential functions. We fix this via our RevOps Consultancy, and we're thinking, that just maybe, this might be the case for you as well.
Let's chat about how we can make your marketing, sales, and customer service strategies more effective. Are you free for a quick call sometime this week?
By the way, we recently earned the badge for the #1 sales, customer service consultant, and the #2 product marketing company in India on Clutch with 4.9/5 ratings.
Looking forward to connecting.
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Jake B (Launched 11.20)@chtrbx_ai
Hey there, can’t say I get the part (joke?) about the code. Otherwise, seems okay. Kinda lukewarm. I’d make it a little punchier.
Like why would I be excited about your service? Your high ratings and # of founders is cool… any money or savings you could throw in?
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@chtrbx_ai Jake, thanks for the feedback. Based on your feedback I made the changes and I am sharing it with you and using your name as a reference.
Subject Line: Jake, We Fixed It!
Nah, not a code, Jake,
As we're clueless about that world. However, we've cracked the code for something just as critical – marketing, sales, and customer success operations.
We've helped over 25 founders and leaders in 7 countries achieve 88% growth who were once in the same boat, clueless about these essential functions. We fix this via our RevOps Consultancy Services, and we're thinking, this might be the case for you as well.
Let's chat about how we can make your marketing, sales, and customer success strategies more effective. Are you free for a quick call sometime this week?
By the way, we recently earned the badge for the #1 sales, customer service consultant, and the #2 product marketing company in India on Clutch with 4.9/5 ratings.
Looking forward to connecting.
I appreciate the energy/tone but I don't really understand the joke or what you're offering.
If you're doing the cold emails 1 by 1 maybe you can talk about what specifically you could help that company with?
@entreeden, thanks, thanks for the feedback. Based on your feedback I made the changes and I am sharing it with you and using your name as a reference.
Subject Line: Eden, We Fixed It!
Nah, not a code, Eden,
As we're clueless about that world. However, we've cracked the code for something just as critical – marketing, sales, and customer success operations.
We've helped over 25 founders and leaders in 7 countries achieve 88% growth who were once in the same boat, clueless about these essential functions. We fix this via our RevOps Consultancy Services, and we're thinking, this might be the case for you as well.
Let's chat about how we can make your marketing, sales, and customer success strategies more effective. Are you free for a quick call sometime this week?
By the way, we recently earned the badge for the #1 sales, customer service consultant, and the #2 product marketing company in India on Clutch with 4.9/5 ratings.
Looking forward to connecting.