Looking for feedback for my landing page copy.
Ib sylla ☝😎
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Hi everyone, I've crafted 10 different copies for my project management and team collaboration software. I'll be glad to have your thought on these. Can you please 🙏 react to your favorite one?
1-Project management simplified from A to Z.
2-Manage your projects without friction.
3-A powerful collaboration roof for your projects.
4-Welcome Welti, the successful project manager superpower.
5-Maintain unbreakable project management cycles.
6-Easily organize your work. Empower team collaboration.
7-Make your projects and tasks more manageable.
8-Keep your work and projects under control.
9-The assisted steering for project management and team collaboration.
10-How projects land successfully.
Thanks for your help
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Tyler Dane@tylerdane
8, especially if it were simplified to "keep your work under control"
I like the positive sentiment of 10, but "land" feels awkward
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I like these ones out of the options:
Project management simplified from A to Z.
Easily organize your work. Empower team collaboration.
"Project Management Superpowered"
I am wondering, what is the difference between this tool and the other PM platforms out there?