Give feedback on my Ship page, please?

Vian Trinh
6 replies
Hi guys, We're about to launch an analytics product for tech-savvy people (developers and tech founders). I'd appreciate your help and feedback on my Ship page - Thank you!!! P/s: My expertise is growth marketing, and I'm more than happy to help you in any way (looking at your Ship page, working out your launch plan, etc.)


Carsten Pleiser
Great product and makes sense - I would replace the background image as the text gets cut off:
Lior Galante Cohen (Vaza)
- Loved the use of bullets, and the fact you replaced them with relevant emojies. However, the emoji next to "Conversion & churn rates" isn't showing up on my computer. - Great visuals, both for the background and the product screenshot. They really give me a better sense of what your product is all about and how it's going to look like. If you could move the dashboard in the background to the right, it won't be partly hidden by the main chat in the center. - It's excellent that you added an incentive that creates a sense of urgency, to push people to subscribe. Would love to hear your feedback about our Ship page:
Vian Trinh
@lior_galante_cohen Thank you so much, Lior! Let me double check the Ship page and fix it to your suggestion :) Your Ship page is gold - love it :) How did you guys make the embedded image animated like a GIF? That's cool
Lior Galante Cohen (Vaza)
@vianingrowth You're welcome, and thank you for your feedback! We created 3-4 different images, and then just used a free GIF generator, there are a few online :)
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