UX Design service page feedback needed 👀
Mher Hovakimyan
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Hey Product Hunters 🧡
Recently, I've made some changes to the Ideal Studio service page. Now it's more conversion oriented. But it's just a hypothesis. I don't want to double-guess, so I'm asking for feedback 👀
I would love to know:
1. What did you like about the service page?
2. What didn't you like about the landing page?
3. What unanswered questions about the service do you still have?
UX service page: https://ideal.studio/services/re...
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Daniel Craig@daniel_craig
Hi Mher.
What did you like about the service page?
- The font choice
- The examples
What didn't you like about the landing page?
- I found the first section hard to read/digest. Combination of too wordy and slightly disjointed English.
What unanswered questions about the service do you still have?
- What do you actually specialize in?
Overall, I came away with the following:
- You do UX stuff
- There's a pHD involved
I suspect because there's so much you CAN/COULD do given your expertise, that you're trying to cover a lot of bases by being broad. It's sort of like "hey, we have food, you can use food to nourish your body and the cells in your body will appreciate that" as opposed to "Delicious Healthfood Here", if that makes sense.
I think you should focus more on your problem solution section and bring that above the fold. There you're talking about my real pains, and how you're going to help. That's much more impactful.
Hope that helps!
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