Launch day tomorrow! Which one of the following taglines is more engaging?
Royce Wong
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1. InOrbit - designed specifically for today's hybrid or remote teams. Operate with unparalleled efficiency, improve productivity, deliver consistent outcomes, and get more work done.
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2. InOrbit - Your meetings, frameworks, and actions. Aligned. Transform your team's potential into impact with our enablement platform. Achieve even better results together.
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Divine Rivers@divine_rivers1
Number 2 IMO. Also good luck tomorrow.
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With its promise to empower remote and hybrid teams through efficiency, productivity, and consistency, the first InOrbit offering seems ideal for an operational standpoint, while the second InOrbit's focus on aligning meetings, frameworks, and actions could be more suited for teams looking to translate their potential into impactful results.
@jeremy_j24 Cheers mate. Appreciate you taking the time to digest the content. We'll take your suggestions into consideration.
I like the 2nd sentence of the first. The first sentence confuses me because I don't know yet what InOrbit does and I can't judge whether it's a fit for my team configuration yet.
I’ll go with the second one . Reason , it’s eye catchy syllable wise it’s sounding good .
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1 for me. If I were to look at your website for the first time I would need a short description/explanation of the product, so I feel like the first one does just that. :)
Hey Royce. Good luck tomorrow
The second sentence works better than the first in my opinion.
I'll pick second over first. 🤝
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Thank you all! We're going with no.2.
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