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Can you share your feedback on the landing page?

SK RAFIQUL ISLAM
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I am looking for feedback to make the landing page copy more clear and to-the-opoint. Here's the page:https://contentmarketingvip.com/...

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Brennen Barney 🚀 ClickStack.io
Looks good to me! I’m personally not a huge fan of the yellow color scheme but that’s more of a personal thing haha
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Ade
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David J. Kim
-For the desktop hero section, it's tough to follow w/ my eyes. Your logo's too big and it competes with your headline. The headline should also be 2 sentences, not 3. -Not sure why the note about not having video lessons is important. Why is it showing up so early? -Your letter is read by Joe Oulizzi? Can you get a testimony from him? -Design itself is a bit plain on mobile, -The checklist is not aligned with the text (Content marketing & SEO breakdowns) -The grey background (from $25/year) is too small. It either needs to be removed or have more padding from top to bottom.
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