@jamesaaaa Amazing idea.
Few suggestion which might improve your conversion.
- A good logo would bring in authority and authenticity
- Too much whitespace, may be add a few visual elements
- Certain fonts are illegible
- Many UI components overlap in desktop view
- Change the UI elements that are not readable
- So many fonts across the page, limit it to 2
Cheers, keep up the good work.
I have shared few reference images here:
https://twitter.com/GrowWithTLP/... 
YourGPT