
I have now tried several stories based on premises i had written down for future writing.
I have to admit i was impressed by what was produced just from the prompt and my suggested characters.
It was intended as a mystery suspense, and it certainly gave a great atmosphere.
Having said that, i wouldn't rush straight out and publish it as is. I would recommend reading through it with an editor's eye. In the instance of the first story, the transitions were confusing, and the time logic as well. I found areas where i could expand and improve the story. I am not complaining about that, that's fun.
Just leaving my thoughts to guide others.
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