Vael helps authors question long drafts, find plot holes, check consistency, and revise privately without surrendering the manuscript.

Hey PH 👋

I’m Michael, founder of Model Zero Systems Inc.

We’re building practical AI products for people who need more than generic chatbots — starting with Vael.

Vael is a privacy-first AI revision workspace for fiction writers. It helps authors organize chapters, characters, timelines, and world notes, then get targeted feedback on prose, continuity, structure, and style.

A lot of writers want AI help, but they don’t want to paste their entire unpublished manuscript into a black box.

That’s the core idea behind Vael: powerful AI feedback, but with clearer control over what context is shared and why.

I don’t think AI should replace writers. But I do think it can become a thoughtful revision partner — helping authors spot issues, strengthen scenes, and stay in control of their creative work.

This is our first public launch for Vael, so I’d genuinely love feedback — especially from fiction writers, editors, indie authors, AI builders, or anyone thinking about privacy-first creative tools.

Thanks for checking it out ✍️

Does Vael actually read the full manuscript or does it work chapter by chapter, and what happens if my draft is like 120k words?

How does Vael actually spot plot holes or does it mostly flag inconsistencies like timeline or character name mismatches?

Asked it about a subplot I kept second-guessing and it flagged a timeline contradiction I'd missed on three rereads. That alone is worth the trial.