Launching today

Vael
Private AI feedback for fiction writers
4 followers
Private AI feedback for fiction writers
4 followers
Vael helps authors question long drafts, find plot holes, check consistency, and revise privately without surrendering the manuscript.







Hey PH 👋
I’m Michael, founder of Model Zero Systems Inc.
We’re building practical AI products for people who need more than generic chatbots — starting with Vael.
Vael is a privacy-first AI revision workspace for fiction writers. It helps authors organize chapters, characters, timelines, and world notes, then get targeted feedback on prose, continuity, structure, and style.
A lot of writers want AI help, but they don’t want to paste their entire unpublished manuscript into a black box.
That’s the core idea behind Vael: powerful AI feedback, but with clearer control over what context is shared and why.
I don’t think AI should replace writers. But I do think it can become a thoughtful revision partner — helping authors spot issues, strengthen scenes, and stay in control of their creative work.
This is our first public launch for Vael, so I’d genuinely love feedback — especially from fiction writers, editors, indie authors, AI builders, or anyone thinking about privacy-first creative tools.
Thanks for checking it out ✍️
Uploaded a messy 80k draft and asked it to flag timeline inconsistencies, it caught three I'd missed in three reads. Skeptical of AI writing tools but the privacy-first angle here actually makes me feel safe experimenting with my WIP.