Zeeshan Sheikh
Zeeshan Sheikh@zxed · builder

Get maker feedback on gliddi.com landing page content - is it too ambiguous?

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@zxed Hello, currently your landing page is so simple, try to add screenshots of your app, and write more description about your project. From the first reading, I did not understand much what do your app, it's something like Discord?
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@nikolay_siabrenko Thanks! Yes, kinda like discord, but for, companies (not streaming games :) ) - I updated the first liner... hope it makes things more clear...
@nikolay_siabrenko please have a look at the updated version :) http://gliddi.com/
@zxed Already much better, maybe add scroll arrow to the slider, because it is not immediately clear. Add more white spaces after text, add images to other features so that everything was in one style. Add footer with something like Logo/Project name + links to - Contacts, FAQ, Privacy, Terms etc. Remove this block - It empty and creating bottom scroll on the page.
Hey @zxed, the landing page looks really dull. What you can improve is 1. Add a background image to the main header text "Grow, Learn, Do - Together" 2. Instead of showing features in a box, you could try this https://drive.google.com/file/d/... 3. Use Colors! Make the important parts stand out. 3. Give more information on the product. The landing page just tells me the features of the product, If I don't see what it is then I don't know what it is. 4. Why did you strike out the "Get started" Button? It doesn't make sense 5. Improve the pricing tab Maybe @syswarren could give you more insight on improving the landing page.
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@zxed @syswarren Made a pricing tab - https://drive.google.com/file/d/... You could do something like that 👆
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@harowitzblack Dude what you are doing is so nice. Just wanted to say that seeing how you spent time mocking up a new version put a smile on my face. :) This is why I love PH.
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@anthilemoon haha thanks! You made me smile like this.
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@syswarren @harowitzblack Thanks! really appreciate the visual tab. As soon as I fix what you mentioned in point #3 (more info/clarity on product), I'm going to jump to the others. I striked those out to avoid the "your links dont work" :)
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@harowitzblack This pricing card amazing :)
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@zxed Congrats on launching a first version! I spent a couple of minutes on it, which is realistically the maximum time a person would take to make a decision about clicking to learn more about the product or not, and I still don't know what the product is doing. You should 100% add some screenshots, and if possible get a mate at a startup to test it and give you a testimonial or a case study showing how they benefited from using your app.
@anthilemoon Thanks!!! I am definitely working on getting the messaging cleaned up (just pushed an update) - and the "couple of minutes" is a great point; I'm trying to get to "A user can figure out in less than 30 seconds" what this is/does!
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@anthilemoon Would really appreciate it if you can have a look at the updated version. Hopefully this time its more clear!
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@zxed just checked on phone and about to go to bed, but quick feedback: (1) do you have any actual screenshots? (2) I think I understand better what the product does, but I'm still struggling in terms of what value it brings. What's the ROI? What am I saving here, time? Or is it about making team relationships smoother? Just not sure what the value proposition is.