Eugene Berlin
Eugene Berlin@eugeneberlin · Lead Growth Marketer at Fulldive

To complete my last Medium post called "What is Evry?"

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@eugeneberlin Let me know if you want me to give you feedback on your post before you publish it! 📖
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@jamesstewart Sure, James, why not? Thanks!
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@jamesstewart Here is a draft or to be honest a 1st version of my article. We wanna change a bit the whole structure but you can check it before editing if you'd like! https://medium.com/evry/what-is-...
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@eugeneberlin What was the purpose of writing this blog post? If you are going for an informative piece then I like the direction you are heading in, but if you are aiming for it to be an announcement then I feel it is maybe a bit long for that purpose. In addition, you have left the actual announcement of your solution until 4 paragraphs in which is quite risky as many people will not continue reading if there is no clear direction of the post. I feel like maybe a heading or two would be beneficial to help clarify the structure. Other than that, I love what you are doing with the post and I really like the solution that you are developing!
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@eugeneberlin I have a lot more feedback if you want it, but another thing I need to mention is that your vision is not made clear enough other than by the fact you have emboldened it. Starting off a new paragraph under a heading of "Why are we building Ervy?", or something similar, would help better frame your vision and give it the prominence it deserves in the article.
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@jamesstewart thanks for your feedback, James! This article was about my personal feelings about our product, so it doesn't pretend to be a good marketing tool for Evry. But later I'm gonna rewrite it to make people wanna read it till the end and feel the same as our team feels about Evry. Thank you!
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