Share your upcoming product's tagline and get feedback what you can improve?
Carsten Pleiser
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When you launch on PH, you need to describe what your product does in under 60 characters.
Write down your tagline below and get feedback. Will it grab people's attention? Does it work? Will it stick?
You can use https://charactercounter.com/ to make sure you're not exceeding 60 chars.
PS: Please upvote this post, so we can help more makers.
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For Paperless.io, I currently have the following tagline, but I'm not sure if it sticks:
"Work faster and smarter with secure eSignatures 🚀"
Alternatively, I have:
"Create, edit, send, sign & automate business documents"
Any feedback as to which one works better?
@ckpleiser I like more
"Work faster and smarter with secure eSignatures 🚀"
And i would change it to
"Faster, Safer and smarter eSignatures"
Hey @ckpleiser
Nice post! For Speetals (https://speetals.com/) i have this reworked version of it:
"Web Performance monitoring tool that recovers lost $ and make users happy"
What do you think?
Thanks!
@loukilaymen I find make users happy a bit cliche.
Maybe "Web performance monitoring tool to recover lost revenue"
For xperi.nz - a platform to get 3D/AR experience for e-commerce products.
Sell more online, by having a 3D/AR version of your products
@satyendra_sahani how can I sell more?
@bogomep It basically enhances the consumer experiences which ultimately leads to sale more.
Check this out. https://jasoren.com/how-to-bring....
@satyendra_sahani Uh, I like that - straight to the point and outcome oriented
Hi @ckpleiser, great idea :)
For Griply, an app for tracking your life goals I have a couple of versions:
- A simple app to reach your life goals
- Live your best life with guided goal setting
- One app for journaling and goal setting
- One app to reflect on life and set your goals
What do you think?
App Store page: https://apps.apple.com/app/id155...
@amber_haccou I love the "Live your best life with guided goal setting" tag line - it motivates me to learn more about Griply.
@ckpleiser thank you! This really helps me out 🙏
utopiops.com: "From code to production in seconds"
@m_kamrani like it - also: "Build, deploy and host your applications in seconds"
@ckpleiser Thanks Carsten :)
1. Mixio - a landing page builder to validate ideas fast (https://mixio.net)
Tagline: "Validate your idea in a day, not months!"
2. LabSocial - a growth tool to build Twitter audience (https://labsocial.com)
Tagline: "Watch your Twitter audience grow 🌱"
Thanks for helping out :)
@ckpleiser thanks for your feedback :D