Share your upcoming product's tagline and get feedback what you can improve?

Question

When you launch on PH, you need to describe what your product does in under 60 characters.

Write down your tagline below and get feedback. Will it grab people's attention? Does it work? Will it stick?

You can use https://charactercounter.com/ to make sure you're not exceeding 60 chars.

PS: Please upvote this post, so we can help more makers.

Carsten Pleiser · Accepted Answer

@loukilaymen I find make users happy a bit cliche.

Maybe "Web performance monitoring tool to recover lost revenue"

Amber Haccou · Answer

Hi @ckpleiser, great idea :)

For Griply, an app for tracking your life goals I have a couple of versions:
- A simple app to reach your life goals
- Live your best life with guided goal setting
- One app for journaling and goal setting
- One app to reflect on life and set your goals

What do you think?

App Store page: https://apps.apple.com/app/id1556692747?fbclid=IwAR0C3hLKkSbsO6YJM7OGZ2ktjY1WaXiP2lPpT9pAVFk0qkHcDnOd2ccNlOM

Carsten Pleiser · Answer

@m_kamrani like it - also: "Build, deploy and host your applications in seconds"

Carsten Pleiser · Answer

@ufocoder re:

Mixio - I actually liked " A landing page builder to validate ideas fast" more :)
LabSocial - I like your tagline.

Answer

Create winning videos with the best video recording software.

Carsten Pleiser · Answer

@satyendra_sahani Uh, I like that - straight to the point and outcome oriented

Kazi Rabbany · Answer

@ckpleiser thanks for your feedback :D

Kazi Rabbany · Answer

1. Mixio - a landing page builder to validate ideas fast (https://mixio.net)
Tagline: "Validate your idea in a day, not months!"

2. LabSocial - a growth tool to build Twitter audience (https://labsocial.com)
Tagline: "Watch your Twitter audience grow 🌱"

Thanks for helping out :)

Mohsen Kamrani · Answer

@ckpleiser Thanks Carsten :)

Mohsen Kamrani · Answer

utopiops.com: "From code to production in seconds"

Satyendra Sahani · Answer

For xperi.nz - a platform to get 3D/AR experience for e-commerce products.
Sell more online, by having a 3D/AR version of your products

Bogomil Shopov - Bogo · Answer

@satyendra_sahani how can I sell more?

Carsten Pleiser · Answer

For Paperless.io, I currently have the following tagline, but I'm not sure if it sticks:
"Work faster and smarter with secure eSignatures 🚀"

Alternatively, I have:
"Create, edit, send, sign & automate business documents"

Any feedback as to which one works better?

Aymen Loukil · Answer

@ckpleiser I like more 
"Work faster and smarter with secure eSignatures 🚀" 
And i would change it to 
"Faster, Safer and smarter eSignatures"

Carsten Pleiser · Answer

@elena_cirera why not: Win Trust With Video Updates, Testimonials, and Feedback

Share your upcoming product's tagline and get feedback what you can improve?

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