Feedback on landing pages or pricing pages
Vinish Garg
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Being on Product Hunt since its very early days, I have reviewed and spoken to hundreds of founders worldwide for their product positioning, message, onboarding, and retention strategy. Share your product URL below and I will give you give you a minimum of three things that you need to fix. Go!!
Absolutely no pun intended; this is purely to share my experiences.
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Andre Kay@andre_kay
Awesome. Here is mine. We have a different version for mobile and desktop. Please check them separately.
URL: https://www.bestdateever.co/
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@andre_kay Thanks, Andre. Quick thoughts:
- You are asking for a newsletter subscription, best option is to show them at least 1-2 examples of what they will get. Right now, I am not sure what I will get.
- Why should I trust you, I cannot see who will actually send me emails. Give them an option to know about you, a small paragraph or page about you.
- Make better use of the vertical space (heights of fields in form) so that users can see related important information without scroll too.
- I subscribed. After that I see *Don't leave us* popup—that is not required. I have already subscribed—you can give me that *subscription* option as a checkbox in the home page form itself.
Hope it helps. I have more thoughts if you want to dig deeper. All the best.