How is the upcoming page? Any suggestions?

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Here is the link to upcoming page - https://www.producthunt.com/upcoming/live-life-a-simulation-game

kush · Accepted Answer

@shvn Great, thanks for the feedback. Will move the emoticons. I am still working on the image. It will be replaced by a video. On the website too.

kush · Answer

@shvn So much better now. 
I would also change "You can use our open beta product through here." to something more succinct like "Check out the beta here >>"

I am working on LightCat.io - here's the upcoming page https://www.producthunt.com/upcoming/lightcat-io

Would love your feedback too.

kush · Answer

The copy is not clear right now. I could not understand what it is for - like what's "the beginning", "game life" etc

Shovon · Answer

@kush_apoorva Yes, I understood your point. Updated to make it more clear. Thanks for reviewing.
Are you working on something too?

Shovon · Answer

@kush_apoorva Looked in to yours. Your points are concise, though I generally like emoticons at varying places, adds emotion to the statements.
 
The image is not so clear. I was interested to click and see larger versions of it, both on upcoming and your site.

How is the upcoming page? Any suggestions?

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